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I am a Year 7 student in the Uru MÄnuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Thursday, May 7, 2020
The monster and Levi
The last couple of days i have been working on a story about a monster and a boy named Levi. Levi kept giving the monster marshmallows because he thought the monster would eat him, but he just wanted the marshmallows , then Levi ran out of marshmallows. The monster chased Levi and then he gave the monster his pillow and he took the pillow to the camp fire and then the pillow got burnt.
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Hi Jacob, I think I might take an extra bag of marshmallows next time I go camping!
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