Thursday, August 15, 2019
Describe an Alien
Today in Literacy we had to Desribe an Alien with wow words.I have done and this is it .
1 comment:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Subscribe to:
Post Comments (Atom)
Hey Jacob,
ReplyDeleteWhat an interesting looking alien. I like the way you started at the head and worked your way down. I wonder where the alien got his blue shoes from? To make this even better you could add some describing words before each thing, for example 'big' yellow eyes or 'bright' blue shoes!
- Miss Morgan